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Wrath Of The Swarm

Publication : 03/19/2010 | 2 Chapters
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Prologue

Tetramites spreading through out the polaris+1 lombax named ratchet=No More Tetramites
The Future Of the Entire Polaris Galaxy In the lombax's?...Hands?....Claws?.....Whatever?




Chapters

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Chapter Publication Last update
1 the spread 07/25/2010 11/23/2011
2 The wrath of the swarm 07/25/2010 11/23/2011
3 the Queens end 07/25/2010 11/23/2011
4 But.... 12/30/2010 11/24/2011
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Online KiwiLombax15 # Posted on February 25th, 2011 at 2:15pm


so much for clean underwear!
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wow...OK...no offense but...that is really... you need to work on that one. Seriously. There's no structure, no dialogue and the grammar leaves a lot to be desired. The basic idea is a good one but it needs a major re-write.

Always remember you're unique - just like everyone else.
Online Taz-dragon # Posted on June 4th, 2012 at 7:48pm


I'm going to be the pirate king!
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True. I thought it was a good idea, but it needs an edit and a rewrite.

Wil Wheaton says: Don't be a dick.
Online NH Gamer360 # Posted on March 15th, 2014 at 12:49pm


It's time to blow @!£$ up!
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yh, I agree. There's literally no grammar so I can't even breath when I read it. Also, when you compare it to some of the other fan fictions it's REALLY short. But good try. :ok:

Be yourself, Everyone else is taken.:-):^^:
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